I read most of Hello, Gorgeous! What does most mean? Does that mean I’m almost finished? Nope. I finished it already. I just skipped most of the beginning.
Don’t get me wrong, it’s a good book and I enjoyed it immensely, but I’m a romance reader. That means I’m looking for romance. In Hello, Gorgeous! Mr. Gorgeous doesn’t enter the scene until page 75 and only for a brief moment. Then he joins the story full time on page 85. That’s way too much other stuff going on before we get to the hot guy, at least for me.
This is why I’m fairly certain I won’t be able to get into chick lit or any other book that isn’t primarily a romance. I do read Stephen King and Dean Koontz, but label a book a romance (Hello, Gorgeous! says Contemporary Romance right on the spine) and I want the yummy dude to hit the scene pretty early into it. If not the first scene, then pretty darn close to it. Page 85 out of 195 is a little late in the game. But hey, this is just my opinion as a reader. As a writer, I always try to start a story at the last possible moment before the reader misses something. Does that make sense?















