This is why I’m fairly certain I won’t be able to get into chick lit or any other book that isn’t primarily a romance. I do read Stephen King and Dean Koontz, but label a book a romance (Hello, Gorgeous! says Contemporary Romance right on the spine) and I want the yummy dude to hit the scene pretty early into it. If not the first scene, then pretty darn close to it. Page 85 out of 195 is a little late in the game. But hey, this is just my opinion as a reader. As a writer, I always try to start a story at the last possible moment before the reader misses something. Does that make sense?
Look at Stolen Pleasures. I could have started the story with Olivia on the way to meet her husband or I could have detailed the battle with the pirates, both could have been interesting. Instead I threw the reader right into the middle of it. If I’d started any later the reader might have missed something.
This predilection of mine to jump right into the heart of the matter got me thinking about my present WIP (a story I’m writing in Works, which I hate.
Where is my Word???? Argh!!!). As I mentioned before, I started this story about 1/3 of the way into it, but tonight I started the beginning. I’d mapped it out in my head already–start in the heroine’s POV, detail a bit about her, and then introduce her to the hero no more than a few pages into it. Instead, I started the story at the last possible moment. (warning: rough draft)
Justin Drake, ninth Marquess of Fontaine, stared down at the raven-haired beauty in his arms and wondered what she was doing there. Obviously he’d collected her somewhere along the way. Sad thing was, he might have completed the waltz without paying her any mind if she hadn’t forced him to do so. A tragedy barely avoided.
She flashed a bright smile and he was captivated. Wherever his brain had been the last few minutes, he hoped it was worth the cursing he was giving it.
“Is something amiss, my lord?†she asked.
“Did you just…pinch me?â€Â
She blinked wide, innocent eyes that belied a mischievous smile. “Would you like me to?â€Â
There was really no need to start any earlier. Anything I wanted to say before can easily, and more effectively, be brought into the story later. It’s my hope that the reader will be drawn into the tale with just these few sentences and want to keep reading. Unfortunately, there’s no way to tell until it hits the stands, if it ever does. *g*
In other news, there’s a thread recently started on the message board titled Do Authors Alienate Themselves? I’d be interested to see what your thoughts are on that subject.
« Hide it